Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Daniel for doing your homework! I hope you will have a great and blessed weekend.
-Teacher Shelly-
Describe an experience where you were unsuccessful in achieving your goal. What lessons did you learn from this experience?
Once I tried to make a independent documentary about the parents who lost their sons in the army who had been beaten and killed by senior soldiers or committed suicide affer being bullied.
>>>>Once I tried making an independent documentary about the parents who lost their sons in the army.
Their son had been beaten and killed by senior soldiers or committed suicide after being bullied.
They were angry because the army always tried to hide the true reason of their sons death.
>>> They were angry because the army always tried to hide the true reason of their son\'s death.
I shoot these parents story for 6month but couldnt finish this project.
>>>I did their story for 6 months but, couldn\'t finish this project.
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