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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. Yes, you\'re right. A good hobby can lead u a long way. Hobbies are good stress relievers.

- T. Beth

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I had thought that because there were hardly time for developing my faculty, I had to focus on increasing that and don\'t had to have a hobby.

>>>> I had thought that because I hardly had time to develop my faculty, I had to focus on developing it that I didn\'t have time to have a hobby.

>>>> OR:  I had thought that because I hardly have time to develop my faculty, I have to focus on developing it that I don\'t have time for a hobby.  

But, while I did like this, I was exhausted because I couldn\'t solve stress coming from heavy burden.

>>>> However, while doing this, I was exhausted because I couldn\'t relieve stress from having a heavy burden.   

After all, these stress engulfed me so terribly that my productivity became lower than before.

>>>> In the end, these stress engulfed me so terribly that my productivity became lower than before.    

So, I realized that resolving the stress is most important for me to grow up quickly.

>>>> CORRECT.

>>>> So, I realized that relieving stress is the most important for me to develop quickly.    

After that, I searched how to resolve stress quickly and well, and decided that a hobby is the great solution in order that I was not at all depressed ahead by stress.

>>>> As a result, I searched how to relieve stress quickly and efficiently and decided that a hobby is a good solution in order to  avoid getting depressed due to stress.  

Therefore, these days I think importantly that making a good hobby is the one of hobbies that can draw toward success.

>>>>  In conclusion,  I\'ve been thinking these days that having a good hobby can draw us towards success.