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2018-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I'm not good at helping people who is stressful. I'm a bit obtuse, so I can't divide the talks that I have to or not. So when I try to appease someone, somebody always derive me out and teach me what I told him or she can hurt his or her feelings more. Than I finally realize I was thinking him her feeling at my way. So this is the reason that I'm not beseem with appeasing.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts today.

Always take care of your choice of words.

I hope you can familiarize yourself with the expressions below.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I\'m not good at helping people who is stressful.
>> I\'m not good at helping people who are stressed.
I\'m a bit obtuse, so I can\'t divide the talks that I have to or not.
>> I don\'t really have a way with words so I can\'t distinguish what to say or not to say.
So when I try to appease someone, somebody always derive me out and teach me what I told him or she can hurt his or her feelings more.
>> So when I try to appease someone, I always end up upsetting them more.
Than I finally realize I was thinking him her feeling at my way.
>> Then I finally realize that I\'m only thinking of how I would feel in that situation.
So this is the reason that I\'m not beseem with appeasing.

>> That is why I\'m not good at calming people down.

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