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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts today.
Always take care of your choice of words.
I hope you can familiarize yourself with the expressions below.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I\'m not good at helping people who is stressful.
>> I\'m not good at helping people who are stressed.
I\'m a bit obtuse, so I can\'t divide the talks that I have to or not.
>> I don\'t really have a way with words so I can\'t distinguish what to say or not to say.
So when I try to appease someone, somebody always derive me out and teach me what I told him or she can hurt his or her feelings more.
>> So when I try to appease someone, I always end up upsetting them more.
Than I finally realize I was thinking him her feeling at my way.
>> Then I finally realize that I\'m only thinking of how I would feel in that situation.
So this is the reason that I\'m not beseem with appeasing.
>> That is why I\'m not good at calming people down.
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