homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What makes you happy?
Whenever I go to new places with a unique atmosphere, Ifeel happy. Especially, I like alleys with old buildings, cafes filled with vintage items, forests filled with nature, which make me feel happy with a relaxed mind.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I appreciate it that you have submitted your homework. I like your answer. As I was reading it, it makes me imagine the places based on your description and it already makes me smile.
I hope that you\'ll be able to travel to these type of places soon because I know that you will really enjoy and it will make you really happy.
~Teacher Gina
>> Whenever I go to new places with a unique atmosphere, I feel happy. I especially like alleys with old buildings, cafes filled with vintage items and forests filled with nature. These type of places make me happy as it also relaxes my mind.
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