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2018-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Who was the best person you have ever met? What was so wonderful about his/her personality or character? I have ever met the best person. He is my ex boy friend. He has accepted me for who I am and he has loved me so much. He has thanked for everything and he has got consideration for others. I have learned a lot from him. We happily remain committed and caring friends with great love and admiration for one another.

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Hello, [이름]!(\",)

I shouldn\'t ask but I\'m dying to ask. If he is the kindest and most loving person you have ever met why is he your ex and not your present?

~T. Lynn

I have ever met the best person. He is my ex boy friend.

>> The best person I have ever met is my ex-boyfriend.
 He has accepted me for who I am and he has loved me so much.

>> He had accepted me for who I am and he had loved me so much.
 He has thanked for everything and he has got consideration for others.

>> He is grateful for everything and is considerate to other people.
 I have learned a lot from him.

>> correct!
 We happily remain committed and caring friends with great love and admiration for one another.

>> correct!

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