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What do you think about elderly women who get cosmetic surgery to make themselves look younger?
I understand elderly women who get cosmetic surgery to make themselves look younger.
Every women want to be more beautiful.
Looks arent's evertything but something.
There is no reason to criticize their cosmetic surgery.
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Hi there [이름]!(\",)
Do you know the Korean drama ID: Gangnam Beauty? Are people who did plastic surgery really discriminated like the main character in the drama?
I understand elderly women who get cosmetic surgery to make themselves look younger.
>> correct!
Every women want to be more beautiful.
>> Every woman wants to be more beautiful.
Looks arent\'s evertything but something.
>> Looks aren\'t everything but it\'s something.
There is no reason to criticize their cosmetic surgery.
>> correct!
OR>> We shouldn\'t criticize them just because they got cosmetic surgery.
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