HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Ageing better will require that lifestyle changes (for example, increased exercise, improved diet, decreased TV watching) be made earlier in your life to make a significant impact. How much would you be willing to change now to improve your life when you are much older?
um... I think i would be willing to change to improve my life.
There are three reason.
First, I enrolled in English classes to improve my English speaking skills.
Second, I prepare the job intervew the week after next.
Third, I have a positive mind.
Thus, I try to do my best.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]!(\",)
I also believe that if we have positive mind, we\'ll have positive life. Good luck with your job interview!(\",)
~T. Lynn
um... I think i would be willing to change to improve my life.
>> I think I would be willing to change to improve my life.
There are three reason.
>> There are three reasons.
First, I enrolled in English classes to improve my English speaking skills.
>> correct!
Second, I prepare the job intervew the week after next.
>> Second, I\'m preparing for a job interview scheduled two weeks from now.
Third, I have a positive mind.
>> correct!
Thus, I try to do my best.
>> correct!
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