homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Many people now have hundreds, or even thousands, of friends on Facebook. How many friends do you think an individual can realistically have?
I think one person usually has 10~20 friends.
My friends is 13 or 14.
Instead, I know many student.
Most of 1grade in school knows me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong hun!
You must be popular at your school. Stay friendly and nice to everyone.
~T. Kelly^^
Many people now have hundreds, or even thousands, of friends on Facebook. How many friends do you think an individual can realistically have? I think one person usually has 10~20 friends.
>> Correct.My friends is 13 or 14.
>> I have 13 to 14 friends.Instead, I know many student.
>> And I know many students.Most of 1grade in school knows me.
>> Most first grade students know me.
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