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2018-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Are there any hobbies you would like to try? These days, I'm interested in C coding that can activate a hardware like a robot. This is operated so logically that if people who like to think deeply can be good in this subject. I usually meditate deeply on something, a problem that I can't resolve. I think this habit give a lot of helps to do C coding. When I met a problem that I couldn't resolve immediately, this problem usually wandered around my head until I can settled it. In addition, although I sometimes got bad grade on math, I like math because it is very logically. Therefore, C coding that is very logically take my interest a lot. Of course, there have been many times when I couldn't solve a hard problem about C coding. When it arising, I always used to search solution in internet. I think this process make hobby naturally.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young! Thank you for this one. Solving Math problems is definitely a challenge. Once you figure out the answer, it gives great fulfillment. Good luck with that.

- T. Beth

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These days, I\'m interested in C coding that can activate a hardware like a robot.

>>>> OR: These days, I\'m interested in C coding where you can activate a hardware like a robot. 

This is operated so logically that if people who like to think deeply can be good in this subject.

>>>> This is operated so logically that people who like to think deeply can be good in this subject.    

>>>> OR: This is a very logical system so people who like thinking deeply can be good in this subject. 

I usually meditate deeply on something, a problem that I can\'t resolve.

>>>> CORRECT.   

I think this habit give a lot of helps to do C coding.

>>>> I think this habit can help a lot in C coding.    

When I met a problem that I couldn\'t resolve immediately, this problem usually wandered around my head until I can settled it.

>>>> When I am faced with a problem that I cannot solve immediately, this usually lingers in my head until I am able to solve it.   

In addition, although I sometimes got bad grade on math, I like math because it is very logically.

>>>>  In addition, although I sometimes get bad grades in math, I like math because it is very logical.  

Therefore, C coding that is very logically take my interest a lot.

>>>>  Therefore, I find great interest in C coding.

Of course, there have been many times when I couldn\'t solve a hard problem about C coding.

>>>> OR: Of course, there have been many times when I couldn\'t solve a difficult problem on C coding.   

When it arising, I always used to search solution in internet.

>>>>  When it happens, I always used to search the internet for a solution.

>>>> OR: In those situations, I always used to search the internet for a solution.

I think this process make hobby naturally.

>>>> I think this process naturally developed in a hobby.   


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