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2018-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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1. Dad turned on a radio to listen to the news. 2. The Mississippi river is in the United States of America. No article 3. Alex is in Boston studying for the MBA. 4. Jennifer tasted the birthday cake her mother had made. 5. There was a huge crowd of people outside the church. 6. Danny wanted a new bicycle for Christmas. 7. The children have a new teacher called Mr. [Name]. 8. Julie talked for an hour about her school project. 9. All pupils must obey the rules. 10. It would help us if you gave an honest opinion.

강사 첨삭

Hi Lucia!

I see that you had the class earlier with Teacher Shanee. I checked your homework which was given by her. Wow, you got 80% correct! Keep up the good work, Lucia! I\'m so proud of you!

I\'m looking forward to speak with you soon. ^^

~Teacher Gina

1. Dad turned on a radio to listen to the news.
>> Dad turned on the radio to listen to the news.

2. The Mississippi river is in the United States of America.
No article
>> CORRECT.

3. Alex is in Boston studying for the MBA.
>> Alex is in Boston studying for an MBA.

4. Jennifer tasted the birthday cake her mother had made.
>> CORRECT.

5. There was a huge crowd of people outside the church.
>> CORRECT.

6. Danny wanted a new bicycle for Christmas.
>> CORRECT.

7. The children have a new teacher called Mr. [Name].
>> CORRECT.

8. Julie talked for an hour about her school project.
>> CORRECT.

9. All pupils must obey the rules.
>> CORRECT.

10. It would help us if you gave an honest opinion.

>> CORRECT.

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