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My biggest pet peeve is hot temperature and strong sunlight in summer.
I don\'t like summer because I want white skin but the sunlight hinders me
When I was in army My skins were burned out to black!.
To keep white skin is very hard.
And also I don\'t like sweating even I like sports
I don\'t play baseball, basketball and soccer in summer
The wind is blows even in summer but the wind is too hot
My biggest pet peeve is the hot temperature and strong sunlight in Summer.
I don\'t like summer season because I want to have a white complexion but the sunlight hinders me from it.
When I was in the army, my skin were burned out and I had a brown complexion.
Keeping a white complexion is very hard, I don\'t like sweating even if I like sports.
I don\'t play baseball, basketball and soccer in summer.
It may be windy in summer but the wind is too hot.
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