Homework

Hi Seong Won!

It seems you know a lot about swimming.

It is indeed a fun activity.

You have described the different bodies of water well.

You made some good sentences here.

Keep it up!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don\'t have my favorite beach.
>> I don\'t have a favorite beach.
I just go where my parents take me.
>> Correct
I like the swimming pool more than thr beach.
>> I like swimming pools more than beaches.
The water is more clear than the beach.
>> The water in pools is clearer than that at the beach.
But the valley is my favorite place to play in the water.
>> However, the valley is my favorite place to play in the water.
It\'s water is clear, the deep is suitably deep when I find the right place.

>> Its water is clear and it is just deep enough when I find the right spot.