homework

Hi Sandy! Good job again on this homework. It is good to see that you are exploring to combine the use of long and short sentences in your paragraph. Long sentences are good when you like to deliver a thought that you do not wish to be cut short while short sentences are good to use when you like to make brief and concise statements.  The short sentences also help to create a breather or space after long sentences so that your reader will have time to reflect on your previous statements. I am happy to see your progress in terms of your writing skill. Congratulations! Just one little reminder, make sure to capitalize the pronoun \"I\" whenever you use it in a sentence. Have a good day!--T. Dee :)

i think it\'s important to keep a kitchen clean because kitchen is a place to make food.

>>I think it\'s important to keep a kitchen clean because it is a place to keep food and make dishes.

so, sanitary condition is really important.

>>So, a sanitary condition is really important.

>>OR: So, a clean environment is necessary.

If it is not clean, it can negatively affect our health.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR:If it is kept unclean, it can cause us some health issues.