Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Composition: Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Why?
1. Death penalty reduces the number of serious crimes.
2. Executions should be shown on TV. This will reduce the number of serious crimes.
I agree death penalty.
I think that it's difficult to prevent the first crime.
But If anyone did murder crime, we could judge by using death penalty.
And We could prevent repeated crime.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Jo!(\",)
I think this is the first homework you submitted. Thank you for finding time to answer my question for today. You did a great job! Keep it up!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I agree death penalty.
>> I agree with the death penalty.
I think that it\'s difficult to prevent the first crime.
>> Correct!
But If anyone did murder crime, we could judge by using death penalty.
>> But if anyone committed murder, he/she should be punished with death penalty.
And We could prevent repeated crime.
>> Then we could prevent the crime to be repeated.
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