Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your opinion about the homework I gave last time. I totally agree with your answer. When we face challenges and we overcome them, we become better persons after.
So, if challenges or problems come our way, let\'s face them head high. No matter how hard it is, always believe that you can overcome it. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I agree with that. If you face challenges, you will try to do everything, even overcoming your limit to succeed over it. It can improve yourself better than before.
>> Or: I agree with that. Facing challenges will make you do everything just to over come it even if it means going beyond your limit. It can make you a better person after.
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