Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Great job on your compositions today! For this specific composition, I only changed \'During the week\' to \' During weekdays\'. Keep up the good work! ^^
Anyway, I really admire you for loving and valuing family time during weekends. As they say, nothing is better than spending quality time with your loved ones, right? ^^
Thank you again, [이름]. Have a great day ahead!
~Teacher Gina
When I hear the word \'weekends\', I am happy thinking about where to go. During the week, I usually stay in my house with my daughter who is just 22 months old. And then when the weekend comes, I can finally go out with my family. So I always wait for the weekend to come.
>> When I hear the word \'weekends\', I am happy thinking about where to go. During weekdays, I usually stay in my house with my daughter who is just 22 months old. And then when the weekend comes, I can finally go out with my family. So I always wait for the weekend to come.
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