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2018-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Q. Explain how good habits lead to success and how your bad ones may have negative effects on your life. I believe that writing a dairy everyday is a good habit for me. And that leads me more diligent person. When i had to get a part-time job, I explained my diligence by showing my perfect attendance award which given by high principal to interviewer So, I got a part-time job! I have a bad habit. it is awake up all night during weekend and vacation so Im very tired at monday

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! ^^

See you in a bit.

- Blair


I believe that writing a dairy everyday is a good habit for me.
And that leads me more diligent person.
When i had to get a part-time job, I explained my diligence by showing my perfect attendance award which given by high principal to interviewer
So, I got a part-time job!

I have a bad habit. it is awake up all night during weekend and vacation
so Im very tired at Monday


I believe that writing a diary everyday is a good habit for me, and that leads me to becoming more diligent.

When I had to get a part-time job, I showed my diligence by having a perfect attendance award, which is given a high principal to the interviewer so I was hired!

Although, I have a bad habit. I tend to be awake all night during the weekend and vacation, so I get exhausted during Mondays.

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