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Hello Jin Young! Thank you for sending this in. If you are a sociable person, attending group meeting and group activities are fun. Yes, you\'re right. You could meet great friends.
- T. Beth
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I\'m prefer to get along with one or two people rather than group when meeting another people.
>>>> I prefer to get along with one or two people rather than in a group when meeting other people.
So, I\'m inclined to be far from group when I attend to group meeting or conference.
>>>> So, I tend to distance myself from the group when I attend group meetings or conferences.
But, at these group meeting, I usually talked with people who I think fit well with me.
>>>> But, in these group meetings, I usually talked with people who I think fits me well.
After taking with those in few sentences, if those\'s character is similar to my character, I become intimate considerably.
>>>> After exchanging few sentences with those people, if their character is similar to mine, we considerably become intimate.
These days, on every weekend I usually meet friend who I met in academy for the first time.
>>>> These days, I usually meet a friend on weekends who I met for the first time in an academy.
Although I know him just during a few months, we become very closer in short time because having the same thought about future.
>>>> Although I have know him in just few months, we became very close in a short time because we have the same thoughts about the future.
Through this experience, I can have known that participating to group meeting can become the good method in making friends.
>>>> Through this experience, I realized that participating in group meetings can become a good method in making friends.
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