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2018-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Do you think it's important to be a member of an organization? I'm prefer to get along with one or two people rather than group when meeting another people. So, I'm inclined to be far from group when I attend to group meeting or conference. But, at these group meeting, I usually talked with people who I think fit well with me. After taking with those in few sentences, if those's character is similar to my character, I become intimate considerably. These days, on every weekend I usually meet friend who I met in academy for the first time. Although I know him just during a few months, we become very closer in short time because having the same thought about future. Through this experience, I can have known that participating to group meeting can become the good method in making friends.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young! Thank you for sending this in. If you are a sociable person, attending group meeting and group activities are fun. Yes, you\'re right. You could meet great friends.

- T. Beth 

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I\'m prefer to get along with one or two people rather than group when meeting another people.

>>>>  I prefer to get along with one or two people rather than in a group when meeting other people.  

So, I\'m inclined to be far from group when I attend to group meeting or conference.

>>>> So, I tend to distance myself from the group  when I attend group meetings or conferences. 

But, at these group meeting, I usually talked with people who I think fit well with me.

>>>>  But, in these group meetings, I usually talked with people who I think fits me well.  

After taking with those in few sentences, if those\'s character is similar to my character, I become intimate considerably.

>>>>  After exchanging few sentences with those people, if their character is similar to mine, we considerably become intimate.  

These days, on every weekend I usually meet friend who I met in academy for the first time.

>>>>  These days, I usually meet a friend on weekends who I met for the first time in an academy.  

Although I know him just during a few months, we become very closer in short time because having the same thought about future.

>>>>  Although I have know him in just few months, we became very close in a short time because we have the same thoughts about the future.  

Through this experience, I can have known that participating to group meeting can become the good method in making friends.

>>>>  Through this experience, I realized that participating in group meetings can become a good method in making friends. 


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