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Hello, [이름]!(\",)
I also agree that climate change was caused by man. Every one must help in any way he/she can to reduce the cause of climate change.(\",)
~T. Lynn
These days global climate change man-made occur because of environmental pollution
>> These days global climate change occur because of environmental pollution which is man-made.
It is very serious caused it is warmer in summer and colder in winter.
>> It is very serious because it caused the summer warmer and the winter season colder.
Many people realize the seriousness of environmental pollution. So they participate in environmental campaigns.
>> Many people realized the seriousness of environmental pollution so they are participating in environmental campaigns.
For example, they can reduce the use of plastic and use a tumbler.
>> correct!
I have practice, too
>> I practice/do this too.
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