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Death penalty reduces the number of serious crimes.
I disagree. It seems not a fundamental solution to reduce crime.
It is the most important to prevent crimes.
But sometimes I agree to apply to death penalty to a notorious murderer.
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Hey [이름]!(\",)
Thank you for finding time to do your homework. I believe that people can change no matter how bad they are so I don\'t agree in using death penalty to punish anyone.
~T. Lynn
I disagree. It seems not a fundamental solution to reduce crime.
>> correct!
It is the most important to prevent crimes.
>> correct!
But sometimes I agree to apply to death penalty to a notorious murderer.
>> But sometimes I agree to apply death penalty to a notorious murderer.
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