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Would you rather bungee jump or skydive?
i'd rather bungee than skydive. because when i was a soldie, i have did like bungee. it is called Helicopter rapel. i was excited when i did Helicopter rapel. But i feel really fear that imaginate rising up and jumping on the sky.
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i\'d rather bungee than skydive. because when i was a soldie, i have did like bungee.
>>I\'d rather go bungee than skydiving. Because when I was a soldier, I did like bungee jumping.
it is called Helicopter rapel.
>>It is called Helicopter rapel.
i was excited when i did Helicopter rapel.
>>I was excited when I did Helicopter rapel.
But i feel really fear that imaginate rising up and jumping on the sky.
>>But I feel really scared that I imagine rising up and jumping on the sky.
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