homework

2011-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Erica

학생이 쓴 원문

2. If there is a person who has difficulty in quitting smoking, how would you help him to quit? I will advise frequently that your smoking habbit may be bad effect for your health and reduce your lifetime. 3. When you have any trouble at work/school, who might be able to help you? I think freinds/coleages who have a close relationship will help me.

강사 첨삭

Hi Choi. :0

Thank you for your composition. It's a good thing that you did your assignment, keep it up.

Please check the corrections.

2. If there is a person who has difficulty in quitting smoking, how would you help him to quit?

>>CORRECT!

I will advise frequently that your smoking habbit may be bad effect for your health and reduce your lifetime.

>>I will always tell him that his smoking habit will have a bad effect in his health and will reduce your lifetime.

3. When you have any trouble at work/school, who might be able to help you?

>>CORRECT!

I think freinds/coleages who have a close relationship will help me.

>>I think my close friends and colleagues will help me.

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