homework

2018-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Would you ever consider having a plastic surgery? I will not have a plastic surgery because I have a handsome face. but my shape of mouth is a llitle ugly so I want to meet a dentist to correct my teeth. some of my friends said to me that you are handsome but the problem is your tall. after hearing that my self-esteem became low

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], have a great weekend

and see you on Monday! ~~

- Blair

I will not have a plastic surgery because I have a handsome face.
but my shape of mouth is a llitle ugly so I want to meet a dentist to correct my teeth.
some of my friends said to me that you are handsome but the problem is your tall.
after hearing that my self-esteem became low

I will not have a plastic surgery because I have a handsome face, but the shape of my mouth isn\'t good so I want to go to the dentist and let him correct my teeth.

Some of my friends told me that I am a good looking but the problem is my height.

After hearing that, my self-esteem became low.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기