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2018-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Anyhow first I am worried about the public’s safety A few days ago, the people wore damaged from storm second is an economic part The weather is affected on the plural jobs For example a farmer, a fisherman etc the other include of jobs The human dosen’t change on climate change But we must be prepared completely from the climate change

강사 첨삭

Hi Lucia!

 

Happy Friday!

I hope that you\'ll have a great weekend ahead! Always take care. ^^

 

~Teacher Gina

 

 

Anyhow first I am worried about the public’s safety

>> CORRECT

>> Or: Firstly, I am worried about the public\'s safety.
 A few days ago, the people wore damaged from storm 

>> A few days ago, the people were severely affected by the storm.
 second is an economic part

>> Secondly, the economic aspect is also affected.
 The weather is affected on the plural jobs

>> The weather affects several jobs.
 For example a farmer, a fisherman etc
the other include of jobs

>> For example, farming, fishing, and other jobs.

>> Or: For example, the jobs of a farmer, a fisherman and others could be affected.
 The human dosen’t change on climate change 

>> Humans don\'t change even if we are already experiencing climate change.
 But we must be prepared completely from the climate change

>> But we must be completely prepared from the effects of climate change.

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