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Hi Lucia!
Happy Friday!
I hope that you\'ll have a great weekend ahead! Always take care. ^^
~Teacher Gina
Anyhow first I am worried about the public’s safety
>> CORRECT
>> Or: Firstly, I am worried
about the public\'s safety.
A few days ago, the people wore damaged from storm
>> A few days ago, the
people were severely affected by the storm.
second is an economic part
>> Secondly, the
economic aspect is also affected.
The weather is affected on the plural jobs
>> The weather affects
several jobs.
For example a farmer, a fisherman etc
the other include of jobs
>> For example, farming, fishing, and other jobs.
>> Or: For example, the
jobs of a farmer, a fisherman and others could be affected.
The human dosen’t change on climate
change
>> Humans don\'t change
even if we are already experiencing climate change.
But we must be prepared completely from the climate change
>> But we must be completely prepared from the effects of climate change.
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