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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this one. I appreciate your consistent effort in sending in you homework. Keep it up! I a good deal to buy a second-hand item for a good price.
- T. Beth
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I have a mania about computer spec as I always do task everyday only able to be solved by using computer.
>>>> I have a mania about computer specs as I always do task everyday that can only be solved by using computer.
If computer specs are not good, computer\'s operating speed is very low, so it affect my speed on operating tasks.
>>>> If computer specs are not good, the computer\'s operating speed is quite slow and it affects my speed on operating tasks.
Therefore I usually choose computer among top of the line.
>>>> Therefore I usually choose a computer that is top of the line.
I would usually select Lenovo(brand) due to having good spec with cost-effectiveness.
>>>> I would usually select Lenovo(brand) due to having good specs and cost-effectiveness.
But, I almost buy second-hand computer because it is little expensive to me.
>>>> But, I mostly buy second-hand computers because the price is more affordable for me.
When I do this, I can buy computer having more high spec than buying new computer having equal price.
>>>> When I do this, I can buy a computer having more high quality specs than buying a new computer with an equal price.
As I contract a person who sell second-hand computer, I typically transact it among $80~$90.
>>>> When I make transactions with a person who sells second-hand computers, I typically bargain at around $80~$90.
Second-hand computer have to reach near this price in order that I can use computer without lack.
>>>> Second-hand computers should cost near this range in order for me to use the computer without deficiency.
>>>> OR: Second-hand computers should cost near this range in order for me to use the computer efficiently.
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