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These days, I lose my weight so i feel the necessity to work out to have a healthy fit .
There is a gym in my apartment community center but i don't utilize this facility.
I should have sports to work out regularly
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Hi Young! Thank you for completing your task today. You did great again. Continue with this positive progress. See you tomorrow!
~~T. Dee
These days, I lose my weight so i feel the necessity to work out to have a healthy fit .
>>These days, I need to lose my weight so I feel the necessity to work out to have a healthy body.
There is a gym in my apartment community center but i don\'t utilize this facility.
>>There is a gym in my apartment community center but I don\'t utilize this facility.
I should have sports to work out regularly
>> I should do sports as a form of work out regularly.
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