homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your homework.
Our city is devastated by the typhoon. A lot of houses were destroyed and lives were lost because of the strong typhoon. Luckily, I am fine. Thank you for your concern.
Anyway, have a good day.
~T. Kelly^^
How can you prepare for a possible typhoon? Answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I think the possible typhoon is heavy rain and strong wind.
>> When there is a typhoon, expect heavy rain and strong wind.
So, I will not go out and just stay at home.
>> Correct.
Yesterday, I see the Phliiphens typhoon site on Korean news.
>> Yesterday, I watched news about the typhoon that hit the Philippines on Korean news.
It was so scared.
>> It was so scary.
>> I was so scared.
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