Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your biggest goal in life?
Now I want to be a great filmmaker.
My plan is to direct a feature film with a great story in 10 years. I hope people to be inspired by my documentary work.
강사 첨삭
James, thank you for answering your homework!
Thank you for sharing about your biggest goal in life.
God bless!
-Teacher Shelly-
What is your biggest goal in life?
Now I want to be a great filmmaker.
>>>Correct!
My plan is to direct a feature film with a great story in 10 years.
>>>Correct!
I hope people to be inspired by my documentary work.
>>>Correct!
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