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With super typhoon "Mangkhut" attacking directly, There are many accident on people in Philippines.
Due to Mangkhut, all airplane flights were stopped, and casino in Macao are ceased for the first time.
Also, in south area of China, two nuclear power plants were on alerts, which were on the typhoon's heading way.
According to foreign press, the toll has been increased from 20 people who are known initially to 59 people in Philippines attacked by Mangkhut. But, with the increasing search and rescue work, people are predicting those are increased considerably.
With landslide in Philippines' Northern Penggat continually, it has been happened that 59 people are dead and 16 people are disappeared until now.
"With arising the landslide, soils and stones engulf miner's dormitory, so it may be happened that the toll may be 100 people only in this area", saying mayor.
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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for the effort of sending this in. It\'s actually news for me. I didn\'t watch the news lately so I came to know these things after reading your homework. Yes, this is the situation in my country. It\'s serious. See in class!
- T. Beth
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With super typhoon \"Mangkhut\" attacking directly, There are many accident on people in Philippines.
With super typhoon \"Mangkhut\" attacking directly, There are many accident on people in Philippines.
>>> With super typhoon \"Mangkhut\" attacking directly, many people got into accidents in the Philippines.
Due to Mangkhut, all airplane flights were stopped, and casino in Macao are ceased for the first time.
>>> Due to Mangkhut, all flights were canceled and casinos in Macao are ceased for the first time.
>>> Due to Mangkhut, all flights were canceled and casinos in Macao are ceased for the first time.
Also, in south area of China, two nuclear power plants were on alerts, which were on the typhoon\'s heading way.
>>> In addition, two nuclear power plants in Southern China were on alert due to the typhoon headed their way.
>>> In addition, two nuclear power plants in Southern China were on alert due to the typhoon headed their way.
According to foreign press, the toll has been increased from 20 people who are known initially to 59 people in Philippines attacked by Mangkhut.
>>> According to foreign press, the toll of casualties has increased from 20 people to 59 epeople after Mangkhut hit the Philippines.
But, with the increasing search and rescue work, people are predicting those are increased considerably.
>>> However, with the continuous search and rescue operations, people are predicting the number of casualties will increase considerably.
>>> However, with the continuous search and rescue operations, people are predicting the number of casualties will increase considerably.
With landslide in Philippines\' Northern Penggat continually, it has been happened that 59 people are dead and 16 people are disappeared until now.
>>> With the continuous landslides in the Northern part of the Philippines, 59 people were reported dead and 16 people are still missing.
>>> With the continuous landslides in the Northern part of the Philippines, 59 people were reported dead and 16 people are still missing.
\"With arising the landslide, soils and stones engulf miner\'s dormitory, so it may be happened that the toll may be 100 people only in this area\", saying mayor.
>>> \"With the incidents of landslides, soil and stones covered miner\'s dormitory, so there is a possibility the toll will reach 100 casualties only in this area,\" said the mayor.
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