homework
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Q. What do you do to get rid of stress?
I smoke to get rid of stress. When someone makes me angry or stressed I leave there instead of fight with him and I find where i can smoke.
I know that smoking is too bad to my body but It is hard to stop. although I am tring to quit smoking
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- Blair
I smoke to get rid of stress. When someone makes me angry or stressed I leave there instead of fight with him and I find where i can smoke.
I know that smoking is too bad to my body but It is hard to stop. although I am tring to quit smoking
I smoke to get rid of stress. When someone makes me mad or stressed, I just leave instead of fighting with the person. I know that smoking is unhealthy to my body but it is hard to stop although I am trying to quit it.
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