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2018-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I can\'t give away my cell phone. There are my 1411 percious pictures in my gallery...Most of them are about the things I like(Harry Potter, Maze Runner··· etc). And the memos l wrote in my memo application are very important things. I have wort all ID and password in my memo application, so without it, I can\'t log- in to most of the web site. And I also wrote all the writing meterial, so if someone look at it, I will die being shameful.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

It\'s nice to have you back. I missed your writing.

You sure can tell a story.

I\'m glad to read your work again.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I can\'t give away my cell phone.
>> Correct
There are 1411 percious pictures in my gallery

>> There are 1,411 precious pictures stored in my gallery.

Most of them are about the things I like(Harry Potter, Maze Runner··· etc).
>> Most of them are showing the things I like such as Harry Potter, Maze Runner and others.
And the memos l wrote in my memo application are very important things.
>> I have also written some notes in my memo application and these are very important to me.
I have wort all ID and password in my memo application, so without it, I can\'t log- in to most of the web site.
>> I have written all of my IDs and passwords in my memo application, so without it, I can\'t log in to most websites.
And I also wrote all the writing meterial, so if someone look at it, I will die being shameful.

>> I also wrote some compositions so if someone sees them, I will die of embarrassment.

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