HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Lucia!
Thank you for submitting your homework!
I agree with you that dreams come from the ambitions we have in life.
I hope that you\'ll be able to make your ambitions and dreams come true!
Have a good night and take care!
~Teacher Gina
I think the ambitions same as the dreams.
>> I think ambitions are the same as dreams.
The reason why the dreams come from by the ambitions.
>> The reason why I said this is because dreams come
from ambitions.
If the people don’t have the dreams, whose are not living on desire.
>> If the people don\'t have dreams, they are not living with
desires.
Therefore that is need.
>> Therefore, that is a need.
last days, also I had not the
ambitions.
>> These past days, I also don\'t have any ambitions.
But currently I’m effort have
the ambitions.
>> But currently, I\'m putting effort to have my own
ambitions in life.
My body is so tired however I’m feeling good from the ambitions.
>> My body is so tired however, the ambitions I have makes me feel good.
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