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2018-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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I think the ambitions same as the dreams. The reason why the dreams come from by the ambitions. If the people don’t have the dreams, whose are not living on desire. Therefore that is need. last days, also I had not the ambitions. But currently I’m effort have the ambitions. My body is so tired however I’m feeling good from the ambitions

강사 첨삭

Hi Lucia!


Thank you for submitting your homework!

I agree with you that dreams come from the ambitions we have in life.

I hope that you\'ll be able to make your ambitions and dreams come true!


Have a good night and take care!


~Teacher Gina



I think the ambitions same as the dreams.

>> I think ambitions are the same as dreams.
 The reason why the dreams come from by the ambitions.

>> The reason why I said this is because dreams come from ambitions.
 If the people don’t have the dreams, whose are not living on desire.

>> If the people don\'t have dreams, they are not living with desires.
 Therefore that is need.

>> Therefore, that is a need.
 last days, also I had not the ambitions.

>> These past days, I also don\'t have any ambitions.
 But currently I’m effort have the ambitions.

>> But currently, I\'m putting effort to have my own ambitions in life.
 My body is so tired however I’m feeling good from the ambitions.

>> My body is so tired however, the ambitions I have makes me feel good.


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