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Hello Jin Young! Thank you once again for this one. That\'s too bad then. I hope the violation fee was not that high though. Haha.
- T. Beth
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When I went to Jeju island with my friend, we lent a car for going to conference site.
>>> When I went to Jeju island with my friend, we rented a car to go to the conference site.
But, we arrived at Jeju late than we expected because departure time of flight was delayed.
>>> But, we arrived in Jeju later than we expected because the departure time of the flight was delayed.
So, we don\'t have much time in order to arrive that site on time.
>>> As a result, we didn\'t have enough time to arrive at the site on time.
As soon as we lent a car in lent shop near a Jeju airport, I drove a car wildly because we had to reach there on time and watch exhibition about echo friendly company.
>>> As soon as we rented a car at the car renting shop in Jeju Airport, I drove the car on a full speed because we had to reach there on time and watch the exhibition on eco-friendly companies.
Therefore I went above speed limit on highway while driving.
>>> Therefore, I went above the speed limit on the highway while driving.
However Jeju island have strictly traffic rule and speed limit on highway is usually low than other places.
>>> However, Jeju Island has strict traffic rules and the speed limit on the highway is usually lower than other places.
As I didn\'t know that fact, I drove a car on speed allowed in Seoul.
>>> Because I didn\'t know about that fact, I drove the car on a speed allowed in Seoul.
>>> OR: Because I was not aware about it, I drove on a speed allowed in Seoul.
After a few days, I received a violation bill about high speed on which I drove a car in Jeju.
>>> After a few days, I received a violation ticket on over speeding for a car I drove in Jeju.
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