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2018-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> In line with Unit 16, have you ever violated any traffic rule before? What did you do about it? When I went to Jeju island with my friend, we lent a car for going to conference site. But, we arrived at Jeju late than we expected because departure time of flight was delayed. So, we don't have much time in order to arrive that site on time. As soon as we lent a car in lent shop near a Jeju airport, I drove a car wildly because we had to reach there on time and watch exhibition about echo friendly company. Therefore I went above speed limit on highway while driving. However Jeju island have strictly traffic rule and speed limit on highway is usually low than other places. As I didn't know that fact, I drove a car on speed allowed in Seoul. After a few days, I received a violation bill about high speed on which I drove a car in Jeju.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young! Thank you once again for this one. That\'s too bad then. I hope the violation fee was not that high though. Haha.

- T. Beth

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When I went to Jeju island with my friend, we lent a car for going to conference site.

>>>  When I went to Jeju island with my friend, we rented a car to go to the conference site.      

But, we arrived at Jeju late than we expected because departure time of flight was delayed.

>>>  But, we arrived in Jeju later than we expected because the departure time of the flight was delayed.  

So, we don\'t have much time in order to arrive that site on time.

>>>  As a result, we didn\'t have enough time to arrive at the site on time.   

As soon as we lent a car in lent shop near a Jeju airport, I drove a car wildly because we had to reach there on time and watch exhibition about echo friendly company.

>>> As soon as we rented a car at the car renting shop in Jeju Airport, I drove the car on a full speed because we had to reach there on time and watch the exhibition on eco-friendly companies.

Therefore I went above speed limit on highway while driving.

>>>  Therefore, I went above the speed limit on the highway while driving.  

However Jeju island have strictly traffic rule and speed limit on highway is usually low than other places.

>>> However, Jeju Island has strict traffic rules and the speed limit on the highway is usually lower than other places.     

As I didn\'t know that fact, I drove a car on speed allowed in Seoul. 

>>>  Because I didn\'t know about that fact, I  drove the car on a speed allowed in Seoul.

>>> OR: Because I was not aware about it, I drove on a speed allowed in Seoul. 

After a few days, I received a violation bill about high speed on which I drove a car in Jeju.

>>> After a few days, I received a violation ticket on over speeding for a car I drove in Jeju.    


 

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