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2018-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Q: What are the positive and negative effects of texting? A: First positive effect is that Before I send text messages, I can think again. Forexample these messages make some feel bad, than I change words or sentances. Second negative effet is that texting cause misunderstanding,

강사 첨삭

Hi Emily,


Thank you for doing your homework. ^^


HOMEWORK:


Q: What are the positive and negative effects of texting?


YOUR ANSWER:


A: First positive effect is that Before I send text messages, I can think again. Forexample these messages make some feel bad, than I change words or sentances.

Second negative effet is that texting cause misunderstanding,


CORRECTIONS:


A: First, the positive effect is that before I send text messages, I can think again. For example, I will ask myself, will these messages can make some feel bad? After then, I change the words or sentences.

Second, the negative effect is that texting can cause misunderstanding.



** Hi Emily, please take note of the corrections. ^^ Thank you. I will speak with you tomorrow. ^^


T. Alexia

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