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I want to go to Cebu in Philippines. I know that it’s very beautiful area,

>> I want to go to Cebu city in the Philippines. I know that it\'s a very beautiful place.
 Also Ther are many mangoes there and I like mango. I will go someday.

>> They said, there are a lot of mangoes there, and I like mangoes. I will go there someday.

I prefer to travel group. Because I feel lonely when I travel alone.

>> I prefer to travel with a group because I will feel lonely if I travel alone.
 Of course, it is also good to travel alone. If I go on a trip alone, it is good to have many new people.

>> It is also good to travel alone sometimes because you get a chance to meet new people.

However, there are many new things happening only when you travel as a group.

>> However, there are new things that can happen when you travel with a group.

What I didn’t think another people could do was think and act. (=Some people think of something I didn’t think about.) And I can rely on group people.

>> What I think other people do is just acting without thinking and I can\'t rely on people doing that.