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Q. How important are goals to you?
The goal is important if desired.(=It is important if it is a goal that must be done to me now.) I can improve if I have a goal.
However the goal seems meaningless to me. Because I have no will. So if you don’t succeed, it is meaningless(pointless?). I think so.
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The goal is important if desired.(=It is important if it is a goal that must be done to me now.)
>> The goal is important if it is desired. It is important if the goal must be done right away.
I can improve if I have a goal.
>> correct
However the goal seems meaningless to me.
>> correct
Because I have no will.
>> correct
So if you don’t succeed, it is meaningless(pointless?). I think so.
>> So if you don\'t success, it is meaningless. I think so.
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