Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Seong Won!
Please take note of the corrections below.
You just need to remember the proper use of articles.
Keep writing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I never try to discount any items.
>> I have never tried asking for a discount when I buy some items.
When the item that I want is expensive, I just save money until I have enough money.
>> When the item that I want is expensive, I just save money until I have enough to buy it.
The school flea market is a good place where I can get fine things at cheap price.
>> The school flea market is a good place where I can get fine things at cheap prices.
The students trys to sell their items as many as they can, so I can get the discount without doing anything.
>> The students try to sell as many items as they can, so I can get a discount without doing anything.
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