Homework

2018-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

<today’s homework> When i heard the word ‘heart’ i think of shape, pacients, mind, love, center and red. - pacient’s heart is beating. - my heart head to my boy friend. - There is a heart in the center of the body. - The heart in the body is red color.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the question I placed for your homework. I really appreciate it. ^^

You can review the corrections/ revision I made on your sentences.


I hope that you\'ll have a good night ahead! See you on our next class.


~Teacher Gina






When i heard the word ‘heart’ i think of shape, pacients, mind, love, center and red.

>> When I hear the word \'heart\' , the following words come to my mind: shape, patient, mind, love, center and red.



- pacient’s heart is beating.

>> A patient\'s heart is beating.
 - my heart head to my boy friend.

>> My heart beats for my boy friend.
 - There is a heart in the center of the body.

>> The heart is located at the center of the body.

>> Or: Our heart is located at the center of our body.
 - The heart in the body is red color.

>> The heart in the body is red in color.


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