Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello James,
Great job in your homework!!!
I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn every day. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need. You can do it if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny
How can you develop a good habit?
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It is very difficult to get a good habit but it is very easy to loose a good habit.
>>It is very difficult to get a good habit but it is very easy to lose a good habit
For example, as you know reading books are good habit for us.
>>For example, as you know reading books is a good habit for us.
It gives us a good information and we can learn a lot of things in the book.
>>It gives us good information and we can learn a lot of things from book.
So in order to develop a good habit,we have to practice very much.
>> So in order to develop a good habit, we have to practice a lot.
If someone gets a good habit and he knows it is good for him, he has to repeat that action.
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