homework
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What are the different ways to help people/community in times of calamities?
i think the best way to help people who in calamities is donate to them
peoples in calamities are become poor because disaster destroy everything
so giving them money is very effective to help
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i think the best way to help people who in calamities is donate to them
peoples in calamities are become poor because disaster destroy everything
so giving them money is very effective to help
I think the best way to help people who are in calamities is to donate relief goods, money, and other things which can help them in possible ways.
People who are under calamity must have lose a lot of things so donating things could help them a lot.
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