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2018-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> If you had the ability to foresee the future, what would you do with it? If I had the ability to foresee the future, I would buy a estimate in Seoul somehow. In Seoul, estimate's price increased madly in short time when Korea has experienced abrupt development for 20 years. As a result, people ,who have had a estimate in Seoul 20 years ago, become millionaires now. Trump USA president also invested estimates in Seoul 20 years age, therefore he earn a lot of money now. Who can think that Korea which was devastated with war become a rich country in short time? PS. In this sentence "I want to have the chance to give a presentation to other people in fluent English.", can this sentence be interpreted to two meaning simultaneously?? Like these, "other people who have fluent English" and "for me who have fluent English to give a presentation ~~"

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin young. Thanks for this. Real estate is definitely a good investment. I would want to have my own building too if I had the chance.

- T. Beth

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If I had the ability to foresee the future, I would buy a estimate in Seoul somehow.

>>> If I had the ability to foresee the future, I would buy real estate in Seoul somehow.    

In Seoul, estimate\'s price increased madly in short time when Korea has experienced abrupt development for 20 years.

>>>  In Seoul, real estate\'s price increased madly in short time when Korea has experienced rapid development for the past 20 years.  

 As a result, people ,who have had a estimate in Seoul 20 years ago, become millionaires now.

>>>  As a result, people who have had properties in Seoul 20 years ago, became millionaires now.   

Trump USA president also invested estimates in Seoul 20 years age, therefore he earn a lot of money now.

>>>   US president Trump also invested in real estate in Seoul 20 years ago and therefore earns a lot of money from it now.  

Who can think that Korea which was devastated with war become a rich country in short time?   
>>> Who could have thought that Korea which was devastated by war would become a rich country in short time?       

PS. In this sentence \"I want to have the chance to give a presentation to other people in fluent English.\", can this sentence be interpreted to two meaning simultaneously?? Like these, \"other people who have fluent English\" and \"for me who have fluent English to give a presentation ~~\"

>>> The later. It is the second meaning. For the first meaning, \"other people who are fluent in English\", the sentence should be \"I want to have the chance to give a presentation to other people who are fluent in English.\" or \"I want to have the chance to give a presentation to other people fluent in English.\"

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