homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Young! Great job on this homework! You followed my instructions very well and you were also able to deliver your ideas clearly. I only need to make very little corrections. See you in our next class!
~~T. Dee
My most memorable memory at highscool is dinner time.
>>My most memorable high school memory happened on dinner times.
After having a dinner we usaually bought some foods such as ice cream and snacks for night study.
>>After having dinner, we usually buy some food items such as ice cream and snacks for our night study.
and walk around the playground to lose the weight
>>And we walk around the playground to try to lose weight.
because at that time, i recorded the maximum weight .
>>Because at that time, I was at my heaviest weight.
However, I miss the highschool life that i didn\'t have to worry many things.
>>But, what I miss the most in my high school life is that I didn\'t have to worry about many things.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.