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2018-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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What do you usually do during your free time? I usually watch TV during my free time. I like variety shows because it can make me laugh. I also like music audition programs. I enjoy watching the stage making the competitors who participated in the audition and growth of them. And the most important thing is that I don\'t need to think anything while I watch TV.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your composition about the question I asked on your homework about your free time. ^^

~Teacher Gina

I usually watch TV during my free time. I like variety shows because it can make me laugh. I also like music audition programs. I enjoy watching the stage making the competitors who participated in the audition and growth of them. And the most important thing is that I don\'t need to think anything while I watch TV.

>> I usually watch TV during my free time. I like variety shows because it makes me laugh. I also like music audition programs. I enjoy watching the performances on the stage by those who participated in the audition. I also like watching their growth as performers. And the most important thing is that I don\'t need to think anything while I watch TV.

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