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2018-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I once made a pencil stub. It was 1cm long pencil, and I named it \'Mong dang\'. I used Mong dang when I lost my extra pencils and play with it when I was bored. And one day, I dropped mong dang from my desk and when I search for it, it was gone. The last story that I heard about Mong dang is one of the students who was cleaning the classroom found it and threw it away. So I made \'Mong dang the second\'. And I lost it too.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

This is a funny story.

You really have a way of telling stories.

Enjoy your holiday!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I once made a pencil stub.
>> Correct
It was 1cm long pencil, and I named it \'Mong dang\'.
>> It was 1 cm long and I named it \'Mong dang\'.
I used Mong dang when I lost my extra pencils and play with it when I was bored.
>> I used Mong dang when I lost my other pencils and played with it when I was bored.
And one day, I dropped mong dang from my desk and when I search for it, it was gone.
>> One day, I dropped Mong Dang from my desk and when I searched for it, it was gone.
The last story that I heard about Mong dang is one of the students who was cleaning the classroom found it and threw it away.
>> The last story that I heard about Mong Dang is that one of the students who was cleaning the classroom found it and threw it away.
So I made \'Mong dang the second\'.
>> So I made \'Mong Dang the Second\'.
And I lost it too.

>> Correct

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