homework

Good day to you Young! I had a great time reading your work. It is very well composed. I can see your point right away because the order of your thoughts is well established. My corrections are just very minimal once again. I have substituted some describing words to a more accurate description to give better weight to your statement like \"for me\" to \"my sake\" which means \"for my benefit\" and \"harmful\" to \"hurtful\" which is more precise when describing a feeling. Overall, outstanding job! You are right on track!

~~T. Dee

Although it was for me, I hate white lies.

>>Although it\'s for my sake, I hate white lies.
It may be can? brake a belief about our relationship.

>>It may cause a false belief about our relationship.
Even if it is harmful to me, i want you to tell me the truth.

>>Even if it is hurtful to me, I always want you to tell me the truth.
It\'s my part to handle the bad feelings from the truth.

>>It will be my responsibility to deal with my emotions upon learning the truth.
I hope that the people around me never do white lies.

>>I hope that the people around me will never tell white lies.