homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Young! I hope you\'re having a great day. Thank you for completing your homework. You did very good on this. You are now consistent in capitalizing the pronoun \"I\" when using it on your sentences and all your sentences also begin with capital letters. Very impressive!
~~T. Dee
I don\'t have a particularly busy day now.
>>I don\'t have a particularly busy day recently.
On the weekday, I attend a part time job at 3pm~6pm.
>>On weekdays, I attend a part time job from 3pm to 6pm.
In remaining time, I spend time studying and having free time.
>>For the remaining time, I spend it by studying and having a free time.
On the weekend, I usually meet my friends.
>>On weekends, I usually meet with my friends.
I will soon quit the part time job and then find a full time job.Then, I will be busy.
>>I will soon quit the part time job to find a full time job. By then, I will be busy.
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