HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What are the disadvantages of technology?
A. First There is a danger of being hakced.
Second There is increase crime with technolongy.
강사 첨삭
Hi Emily,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What are the disadvantages of technology?
YOUR ANSWER:
First There is a danger of being hakced.
Second There is increase crime with technolongy.
CORRECTIONS:
The disadvantages of technology are: first, there is a danger of being hacked. Second, crime with technology increases.
** Emily, you need to answer in complete sentences and be careful with your word spelling.
That\'s all. Thank you. Speak with you later. ^^
T. Alexia
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