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Hello Jin Young! Thank you once again for this one. I kind of agree with you when you said it\'s not extravagance if you work hard for what you have. I think you deserve to pamper yourself in some ways if you really are working hard to earn money.

- T. Beth

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The one of reasons that I like hip-hop musicians is due to their own cars, who sometimes boast their cars in SNS.

>>>  One of the reasons that I like hop-hop musicians is due to their own cars, those who sometimes boast their cars on SNS.

>>> OR: One of the reasons that I like hop-hop musicians is due to their own cars that they sometimes boast on SNS.   

Of course, these actions could be regarded to as greed on material things.

>>>  CORRECT.  

However, I don\'t think these hobby as extravagance if those have money enough to buy expensive things to collect them as hobby.

>>> However, I don\'t regard to this hobby as extravagance if they have enough money to buy expensive things and collect them.     

I think these expensive material things can represent whether people live hard or not in a only case that those have succeed by own ability without helping of parents.

>>> I think these expensive material things can represent whether people work hard or not only in the case that they have succeed with their own ability without help from their parents.    

Therefore, if I achieve a success on financial property, I want to buy branded car such as Lamborghini, Porsche, Land rover and so on.

>>>  Therefor, if I succeed financially, I want to buy branded cars such as Lamborghini, Porsche, Land rover and so on.  

Especially, I want to buy discovery model of Land rover among these dream car because of car\'s design which has sharp and wild curve line.

>>>  Especially, I want to buy the discovery model of Land rover among these dream cars because of its design which has sharp and wild curve lines.   

If I become a rich man, I will collect all car series having Land rover brand.

>>>   If I become a rich man, I will collect all car series of Land Rover.