homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you rather be smart or beautiful/handsome? Explain your answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I think smart is more important then handsome.
Because, I want to be a smarter than now.
But I also to be smarter and handsomer.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your answer. You are already handsome and smart. But, like what you said, you can be smarter. Just continue to learn and you will achieve your dream. I know that you can do it. I am also here to help you.
~T. Kelly^^
Would you rather be smart or beautiful/handsome? Explain your answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. I think smart is more important then handsome.
>> I think being smart is more important than being handsome.
Because, I want to be a smarter than now.
Because, I want to be a smarter than now.
>> Because I want to be smarter than now.
But I also to be smarter andhandsomer.
>> But I also want to be smarter and more handsome.
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