Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In 3-5 sentences,
describe a place you will never forget.
I went to the public cemetery located at the outskirts of seoul 2 years ago to visit my grandmother grave.
And I was surprised by the scale of the cemetery area.
There were sveral thousands of graves placed along the hills.
I imagined the deadbodies lying in the coffins inside the tombs.
I thought death is inevitable destiny of all men.
강사 첨삭
James, thank you for describing a place that you will never forget.
Based on your story. I felt like is a scary story. We will all really die, but the thing is we have to live our life to the fullest. We should make our stay here on earth a meaningful one.
Take care and God bless on your trip to Kenya.
-Teacher Shelly-
>>> I went to the public cemetery located at the outskirts of Seoul, two years ago, I visited my grandmother\'s grave.
And I was surprised by the scale of the cemetery area.
And I was surprised by the scale of the cemetery area.
>>> I was surprised by the scale of the cemetery area.
There were sveral thousands of graves placed along the hills.
There were sveral thousands of graves placed along the hills.
>>> There were thousands of graves placed along the hill.
I imagined the deadbodies lying in the coffins inside the tombs.
I imagined the deadbodies lying in the coffins inside the tombs.
>>> I imagined dead bodies lying in the coffins inside the tombs.
I thought death is inevitable destiny of all men.
I thought death is inevitable destiny of all men.
>>> I thought death is an inevitable destiny for all men.
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